Allen
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3/12/2010 2:38 PM
Awesome work!
Have you considered bidding for a spot on the Wall of Fame?
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foreveryou...
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7/19/2009 9:42 AM
i think you did really good!!
now all you need is music and ur on your way!!
i'm 14 too and i write my own songs but i don't have music to them yet but u should come and check out my lyrics sometime :)
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leanna
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11/6/2008 3:18 PM
You have great potential! I really think you are very talented :)
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wondermombb
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10/15/2008 1:17 PM
I think you definately have great potential!
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RichardIsland
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10/15/2008 11:45 AM
the soul of the song is very spiritual
I wish you luck
I really like the lyric, you have some poetry skills
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MirandaThe...
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10/7/2008 12:12 AM
I think it's really pretty but I do think it could have been better
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