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My wish

My wish My wish to change the past Greatly envelops myself Can't focus in class All I can see is the fear Friends showing the fear The fear that I never want to be true The things I said Never going to be changed People don't take much notice They think she is sick So all they see is the empty chair Not the fact of what I did The ice was never there before The tree was a spawn of death Life of my friend is gone forever Looking at the careless faces All laughing and enjoying themselves None taking notice to the emptiness The less laughter that could be there Why am I so lucky? I would trade places To rid this classroom of this emptiness

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this is a poem i wrote hope you like more to come

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Redboy63
1/8/2010 4:14 PM
Thanks guys


Allen
1/8/2010 3:35 PM Premium
Thanks for uploading this! I look forward to seeing some more of your work.

Charly17
8/12/2009 9:10 PM
i love this one. It is so moving and it gave me the chills. amazing job

meri012
5/11/2009 12:13 PM
good job

mootiy
4/24/2009 10:36 AM
wow, this gave me goose bumps, well written and a very deep thought provoking piece.great job.

 



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Redboy63


Votes: 4
Views: 2,065
Date: 4/23/09
Category:
Other: Writing