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The Vow

The Vow If only you knew How quick Id give my life for you In the end I wonder Would it be worth the plunder? I would give my last breath Plundering deep into my death Thats how much I care for you That Id give my life for you No more wondering Whether this sacrifice would be condescending For Id do Anything to save you Save me you say? For you say this today Perhaps you didnt think clearly Id rather die then to have you die for me I admire your courage and your complacency Though, I would even call it idiocy For with your life taken from me May drive me to insanity Keeping you a live is my goal Id die first before Id let you take your soul No more wondering Whether this sacrifice would be condescending For Id do Anything to save you I should have known youd say these words to me For I would have to say the same to you, you see Lets make a vow we both can keep A goal that is worth its reach To the end we fight the battle that is to come A battle fought until it is won Stay alive with me Is my only plea For you Id do anything just to see That you stay a live with me Idiocy is not what you are You have grown by far To be someone that no one else has expected And as always someone I have respected If that is your wish of me Then yes I will live for you and for me But dont be foolish to ever say again That you die for me at the foot of my hand This I will not take Because its not a sacrifice you should make Live together through to the end Is the vow I make to you my friend ¬ 2007

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This is media written about my one true love and best friend

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Anthony
2/25/2010 10:55 AM Premium
Great Stuff! Have you considered bidding for a spot on the Wall of Fame?

RebeccaJea...
7/8/2009 10:35 PM
You know...I LOVE this poem so much, I just had to come BACK and read it again hee hee...so here I am, commenting again, almost two months later :)! Hey..I don't know if ya saw my poetry on here or not, but feel free to read...:)

beyourownm...
5/19/2009 9:01 PM
I never thought about using it in our wedding.. cuz actually when I first wrote it we weren't together... heh.. but I knew different.. ;0 But thank you, thank you so much, I truly aprreciate the comment.

RebeccaJea...
5/19/2009 8:00 PM
AWWWWW...this is BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Are you going to use this in your Wedding??!!!! You have a TRUE TALENT here :)!!! Keep on keeping on girl!!! :)

 



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Date: 5/2/09
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