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She walked out of the door of lakeview middle for the last time! She had made it! It was 10 days past her 14 birthday. It was her graduation day. Every one was excited. Everyone that is except for Lizzy. She didnt think of this day as an amazing beginning like Cassie the valedictorian said it was, she thought of it as the worst day of her life. Why? Because 1 year ago today her older sister Maddie was kidnapped after going throw the same thing lizzy just did. The worst part is lizzy is convinced the whole thing is her fault. If only she hadnt been at Libbys house! Maddie wanted lizzy to go home with her but she refused, sure lizzy wouldnt see Libby for awhile , she was moving to California but she would never see her sister again. She loved her sister! Maddie was her best friend. All of a sudden the ground was where air was suppose to be and her mom was at her side screaming her name. she jumped up immediately. I am ok, I am ok! she yelled. They walked to there car. Out of the corner of her eye, lizzy saw something small buried in the dirt she bent over and picked up a ball of dirt attached to a silver cord. She hit the dirt off. It couldnt be! Theres no way! It was a small hart locket but it couldnt be her locket. Could it ? The locket Lizzy gave Maddie minutes before she disappeared? They never found Maddie and it was Lizzys promise to her sister that she would find her. The locket popped open with no problem, there inside the locket was a picture of the sisters goofing off at Maddies 13 birthday party. She wordlessly handed the locket to her mom and ran into the forest. The forest had been swiped over and over by professionals but never by Lizzy. She had something they didnt motivation. She saw the light blue dress Maddie was wereing. She turned around and wished she hadnt. thth

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redheadcut...
6/11/2009 4:26 PM
i made a continuation to this story called maddie's mystery

redheadcut...
5/25/2009 11:01 AM
thanx! acting and modeling r my passions! but love to right

RebeccaJea...
5/23/2009 11:36 PM
WOW...this is really good :)!!!! How's the contest coming along (I saw this over at the contest...I do believe I voted for ya??)!!! You have TRUE talent :)!! Keep up the good work and NEVER EVER give up on it!!! You'll go FAR! :)

 



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Date: 5/18/09
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