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summers breeze

SUMMER'S BREEZE As school is close to letting out, and you can feel the energy summing. Your classroom gets a flood of cold air, and you anticipate what else is coming You can almost feel the soft white sand, and then you can see the sun setting. You can hear all your friends laughing, and you can smell the salty air jetting. And you feel like your already there, because time can almost decieve. And this summer will be so long and fun, but it all starts with a summer breeze.

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about wut your thinking before your last day school lets out


12/20/2009 4:31 PM Premium
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11/26/2009 2:56 PM
feels like home in clearwater beach fl. fav

7/27/2009 12:40 PM
thank you so much that means a lot and ill try to post some more soon

7/27/2009 3:26 AM
I almost felt like a kid again, at the beach...sun on my back, toes in the water, feeling the waves gently splashing slowly and surely! What a NICE poem, you got talent dude, I wish you the best of luck, ya got my vote :)!!!



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Votes: 8
Views: 1,190
Date: 7/25/09
Other: Writing