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Romancing the Dreams

Romancing theDreams? Why do Dreams just fly away, When ya just don't want them to? Why do Feelings disappear, Oh what did I ever do? Oh Why... Oh Why do I hurt so bad? When I really loved you True? Oh, DAMN Why did you hurt me so, with all I felt for you?! So, tell me, what part of me was wrong, To make you wander on? Was it because no longer did, I make your world go Round? Could it be that maybe you, still don't understand? That the only thing I wanted, was for both of us to stand. Or, was I maybe not good enough, To grace your every day? How can you blame me for loneliness, When confusion just got in the way? So, why did you tell me I need no one, when I only needed you? You told me, So sorry for your loneliness, Then you turn around & pursue? Oh why oh why did I believe, why did you bring me here? When all I EVER needed from you, Was for you to draw me near? - RebeccaJeanine ¬ Copyright 2008 RebeccaJeanine71 (UN: rebeccajeanine at Writing.Com). All rights reserved. RebeccaJeanine71 has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.

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Just a Romance Poem ...invluenced through real life experience...

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Allen
3/7/2010 8:07 AM Premium
This is great! You should try bidding for a spot on the Wall of Fame.

SlipperyWh...
12/13/2009 8:37 AM
I love this. Famed and voted for in the contest

Janese
9/5/2009 9:14 AM
Nothing hurts as much as a broken heart and shattered dreams. Time does help us heal, though...and then we realize how much strength we have!

justadrummer
8/20/2009 4:08 PM
great poem, you have my vote :D

 



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Date: 7/29/09
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