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ELC - comic 1 - FEAR (story line)

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133098.txtThe Extraordinary League of ChristianityComic one: Fear (possibly)Written by Ben MullinsThe city of Spinsville (cool name, eh?)! A somewhat peaceful city from a view far off. But whats this as we look closer at a national bank?!?! A robbery seems to be taking place! A van stops at the entrance of the bank and 3 people with guns come running out of the back! Oh no! All hope seems lost for the bankers as well as the people inside!The thugs kick open the doors, walk in the bank and shoot their guns up in the air to scare everyone. GET YOUR HEADS DOWN, EVERYONE! This is a hold up! Yellsthe lead thug. Everyone puts their heads down on the ground as they are told. If you let us take what we want without interrupting us, no one will get hurt! Got it?!?!?! Being scared to death, no one said a word. I SAID GOT IT?!?!?!?!?! he screamed with a louder emphasis. Then responding at multiple times, the innocent crowd replies with a yes. With one of the thugs guns pointed at the banker, the lead thug ordered that the banker move out from the counter so he can take the moneyeasier. One small mistake from the crowd could make the three thugs kill everyone inthe bank! Everyone was scared! There was a business man in a suit worried that he wouldnt be able to explain his idea to his boss tomorrow for a good raise. There was a construction worker afraid he might leave his wife and kids if he dies. And there were many other scared people in the crowd, but in the midst was a preacher. Still with fear, he had faith that God would pull everyone through the tough situation!Then with a great WOOSH, the bank door opened and the thugs heard the words,Stop right there, you evil doers! The man who said these words was none other thanSuper-Christian with Lady Nature and Gastro-Man by his side in The Extraordinary League of Christianity! Halt thugs, and fear the power of Jesus Christ! We stand inthe name of the Lord! All the thugs then tried to fight their selves from laughing!Then the lead thug said, Psht! Do you really believe your God can stop us from stealing money! Yea, right! The cops dont even have the courage to stop us, so theres no way your God can! Hey, I dont like the way youre putting Gods namein quotes! said Gastro-Man. Then, the thug continued, Why dont you Jesus Freaks just come down to reality and stop believing in a stupid, invisible, mythical God? Dumb Christians. Then with an angry deep feminine voice, Lady Nature said, You just made your first big mistake, fool! Oh what? Is your God going to come down and strike me dead with lightning? Oh, Im so scared, the lead thug said sarcastically. Then, Super-Christian replied, No, but our God will punish you through us! Then using his super power known as faith, God began to strengthen Super-Christian greatly! The stronger he got, the brighter he got, scaring the thugsin the process. Uh boss? I think its time to go now! said one of the thugs to the lead thug. Get me the money, guys! said the lead thug.The thugs grabbed all they had and gave it to the lead thug. Ok guys, keep these Christians busy while I get the money to the van out the back door! ordered the lead thug. But before the thugs could fire their guns, Super-Christian quickly charged at them with great force! POW! The thugs guns fell out of their hands! Youre under arrest, you have the right to but before Super-Christian could finish his sentence, reinforcement thugs came up behind Super-Christian and tackled him, preventing him from stopping the moving van! Let me help, Christian! We need to hurry so we can stop the van! said Lady Nature. Then Super-Christian replied, You go on and stop that van! Me and Gastro-Man can handle these thugs! Then, Lady Nature began to ask, But what if I JUST GO!!! said Super-Christian interruptingLady Nature. Ok. Ok, she said as she followed the van.It seemed like Super-Christian and Gastro-Man were beat when a multitude of thugs covered them. But with a loud BOOM, Super-Christian was able to use a strong force to blow the thugs off him. Gastro-Man was also able to burp the thugs off of him. And with a lot of punching and kicking, Super-Christian and Gastro-Man were able to beat up all the thugs until they could no longer move. The thugs were arrested later by the cops, but there were still two other thugs on the run in theirvan.The van took a left, then a sharp right. They thought they had it made. But out of nowhere, a great number of plants came up from the ground and blocked them from moving any further. They looked back and saw that these plants were caused by Lady Nature. You wont be going anywhere, money takers! said Lady Nature. The leadPage 1133098.txtthug got out and pointed his gun at Lady Nature, but before he could fire, a plant quickly knocked the gun out of his hands. The other thug got out and both him and the lead thug attempted to run from Lady Nature, but they didnt make it far. She ordered long vines to wrap around them and tie them up. Thanks to their team work, The Extraordinary League of Christianity were able to stop the thugs just in time, but thanks mainly to God.But then out of nowhere, Lady Nature was attacked by a huge bull dog! AAHHHH!!!! she said as it chewed on her arm. Lady Nature had to use her lightning powers to stun the dog. What was that for? said Gastro-Man. I dont know, replied Lady Nature. Dogs dont normally do that to me, they love a woman of nature. Then looking into the dogs ear, Super-Christian found a rather odd metallicdevice with the letters Dr.S written on it. Could this be what caused the dog to attack? said Super-Christian. Maybe, said Gastro-Man. Ewww! You dont know wherethats been, Christian, said Lady Nature. No, but I have a feeling we need to findout! Run tests on this device, said Super-Christian. Well, Im gonna eat. Helps methink said Gastro-Man.After much tests and research, Mary Regolski was exhausted, but found some useful information. Joel Jameson entered and she began to explain what she found. She found on www.google.com a Dr.S who was a possible match for the inventor of the small device. His name was Dr. Edward J. Schwartz. The web page she found said, He was a brilliant scientist who invented a mind controlling device for the army to use. He later got too prideful with his invention and was sent to jail. He later escaped jail and to this day, he has yet to be caught. Joel and Mary didnt know whether to believe this was the person theyre looking for or not. They knew that ifit was, he would be a challenge for them. Joel. If this guy is who were looking for, Im afraid! What if he kills us or something? Then Joel replied, Have no fear, Mary! We shouldnt fear no mere man! Christ is on our side and no man is more powerful than He is!Little did they know that in the device was a secret camera being used by Dr. Schwartz himself to spy on the league. As time went on, he got some useful information about the league. Ah!!! So, the Extraordinary League of Christianity? said Dr. Schwartz in an evil way. I hate Christians, but their powers are magnificent! They will be great people to turn into my helpers! I will prove to the world that even Christians can turn evil! Then, no one will believe in God! Mwahahaha!!! -cough!- -cough!-What will happen with The Extraordinary League of Christianity? Will Schwartz eventually take control of one of them? How will they get their selves out of control when this might happen? So many questions to ask, but only one question that matters. If you died today, where will you go to spend in eternity? Heaven, or Hell? This life we live on Earth is not all there is. If there was, there would be no use for me talking or even living. If youre a human (which all of you should be,hopefully), do you know how God sees you as you are? He sees you no better than those selfish thugs who robbed the bank! Actually according to Gods perfect ways, you probably look worse than that to God, and no one like that are allowed to enter into heaven. This is me Im talking to as well by the way. But like The Extraordinary League of Christianity, there is a real hero who is the bigger heroes of this comic and the biggest hero that ever was! His name is Jesus Christ and He loves you enough to die for you so you can go to heaven. Because He died in your place, you can use Him as a mask to God. You can have the ability to go to heaven in Jesus name, in spite of your imperfect ways. We as our normal human selves deserve Hell instead of Heaven! What is Heaven and Hell? Even the smart people thinkthey really know what it truly is, but no one on this earth really knows what it truly is! Yea, basically Heaven is the best place and Hell is the worst, but we cant comprehend Heavens goodness or Hells badness until we get there. Trust me, Hell is not a place where you want to go! You will be burning, in constant pain, butmost of all youll be alone! Theres nothing worse than the feeling of being alone! Most comic books are about fictional heroes. This here is real stuff! If you have yet to believe in Christ and Jesus death and trust that it will save you, you are still on your way to this awful place know as Hell! But, heres the good part! You dont have to go there. Each of us have to power to believe the Jesus died for our sins. It doesnt end there though. Theres a prayer you need to say to God to becomesaved by the blood of Christ! Say something like this and you have to truly mean ittoo!Dear Lord, I know that Im a sinner and my sinful ways are unacceptable to Page 2133098.txtYou. Copyright ¬ 2009 by Ben MullinsPage 3

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For those of you who may not know, I met a Christian comic artist on facebook in June of 2009. I had pictures I have drawn of the characters of a Christian comic I created called The Extraordinary League of Christians for a long while, as well as stories. Larry Swearingen (comic artist) came a long and found them and decided to try and help me put it out into the world! He is a very great artist, and I just know we'll make good comics!

This is the story line (or just story) of the first comic I have in mind for us! I hope it can boost us off on this and get people interested in it! And hopefully want to see more!!!!!

Listen! In other comics like Spider-Man and Super-Man, they are made up people saving other made up people in need! They sometimes try to save real people from things in life, like Spider-Man's uncle's famous quote! "With great power comes great responsibility!" Those comics do teach and sometimes save people from stress and things of life. But what I want the ELC comics to do is not only save people from the things in life, but also save their souls! Marvel and DC comics are made up people who save other made up people! The ELC comics are made up people who show REAL people who the REAL hero is, being Jesus Christ, and shw them how they can be saved for life, by showing them the way to save their souls!

P.S. - I never expected to be a writer or anything like that in life, but Larry saw my talents and told me I had a lot of potential in that area, as well as story board layouts! So, I will do what I will do, as long as this message gets out there to the people some way. :)

-Ben Mullins

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8/1/2009 8:55 PM
Well hold on now...

...I just realized...

I'm not finished with this story! :O

But hey, this isn't the actual comic. The comic will have the full prayer at the end.

If ya wanna know what the rest is, ask me. :)

-Ben


 



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