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Cotton Candy Cloud~

The Cotton Candy Cloud...... Imagine you are floating on a cotton candy cloud,flying high above the earth. It is soft,pink,blue,yellow & oh so sweet! Just try not to eat it for if you do you may not get to all the sleepy time lands my young ones that you are going to. Our 1st stop is to toyland to pick out your favorite bedtime toy..of course mine is a rat & tattled teddy bear... But you can pick anything your heart disires..be it a baby doll to a doggie, kitty to squirel..it's all here in the toyland. for lil' boys & girls~ Our next stop is snackland to eat to our hearts content..grant it before our beddy bye time,we don't want to over indulge because our bellies would hurt so badly we won't sleep & that just isn't good...so milk & cookies will do or a lite snack is best~ Then on to story book land,& oh the tales they do tell..of Jack Sprat,The Old lady in the Shoe,& even longer ones to boot~ I have heard of a princess & the pea,a Sleeping Beauty,and others of long ago..never met these people I'll tell you that yet they are an interesting bunch,but make my dreams so sound~ Now off to toothland to brush those pearl whites..make them shire for all to see..no holes I see & bugs be gone..mom loves thoses shiny teeth~ By now my tiny ones you start to yawn & rub those tiny eyes...for my work is down & the cloud is your bed,with a soft pillow under your head & my story is at it's end~

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A Children's Bedtime Story I made up & told my children when they were young to help them fall asleep~


2/15/2010 11:10 AM
Beautiful writing!

9/8/2009 6:11 AM Premium
Thank you so much for your coment when I get my computer back from the shop,I'll see what I can do! :)

8/8/2009 10:41 PM
I just read this short bedtime story, and you know...this really would make a WONDERFUL little picture/story book!!! Just a tiny bit of work, and maybe add a bit more to it, and it could be a BEST seller :D!! Keep up the good work :)!!!

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Votes: 2
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Date: 8/8/09
Other: Writing