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Confusion

Confusion I cant decide what Im going to do next This is all far too complex Its all confusing me inside m head All this information Ive been mislead Why cant I understand whats happening to me? Im not blink but I still cannot see Ive been changed Im not the person I used to know Ive been changed does it really show? *** This is tearing me apart silently I wont say anything but its happning violently All of this is getting to me it is starting to hurt Its making me feel like the lowest thing,dirt I cant help but feel like this You got me with your death kiss I dont know if Ill got back to normal now Im just going to have to figure it out But how? By:Feresha Patel

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I poem i wrote in 8th grade.

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Allen
3/16/2010 7:18 PM Premium
Great Stuff! I look forward to seeing some more of your work.

1ring2rule
8/20/2009 7:55 AM
My favorite for the contest so far. A few errors, but I really felt this one. Good job!

 



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Votes: 3
Views: 1,100
Date: 8/19/09
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