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Life That You've Been Given (TDB)(unfinished)

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This is a song I wrote for my cartoon band, The Doovie Brothers, and I still am working on it as a matter of fact. :) I just thought this song had such a great melody and message, that I had to post it and see what people thought of it!!! Maybe not from you guys, but maybe my facebook friends can give me something.

And since it's not finished, I'm sure there's a whole lot that can be added to it... and yes, the bridge I believe would make this song a more Christian song. I start singing at the end, but didn't have time to finish. I have a cool lyric for it, I only need time to sing it. :) I know, my voice isn't that good, but do I care? :)

Verse 1:
Sometimes, life can give you sorrow.
From fighting for a reason to be.
You don‘t know if you‘ll see tomorrow.
‘Cause you don’t think you have what it takes to live.

Intro:
But don’t look at the things you don’t have.
Just look at what you can boast.


Chorus:
When you are down, just look around
Discover the precious life you live in.
Hold closely to what you can lose.
Keep breathing the life that you’ve been given.

Verse 2:
Some don’t even get to see light (meaning unborn babies).
I’m sure if they could talk, they’d say life is a gift.
So please don’t take this life for granted,
Just keep holding on before it is gone.

Bridge:
In the beginning, our whole world was made,
We were given the chance to live life.
Just keep believing your whole life is a gift
From the Heavenly Father up high.

As He makes His way for the price-full pay (this point is where I stop)
On this sorrow day, there’s no other way.
He feels all the pain from the nails in place.
Yes it’s true, He died for you.
Because this man loves me and you.
Yes I know that this is truth.

Chorus (2):
When you are down, just look around
Discover the precious life you live in.
Hold closely to the way, the truth.
Remember the life that He has given.

When you are down, just look around
Discover the precious life He’s given.
Hold closely to the way, the truth.
Remember that Jesus Christ is risen.

The Doovie Brothers creation copyright © 2005 by Ben Mullins
Life that You’ve Been Given music and lyrics copyright © 2009 by Ben Mullins

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Anthony
2/22/2010 4:31 PM Premium
I just came across your media. Awesome Work! We hope to see some more media from you!

 



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Date: 11/18/09
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