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Happy Valentine

Happy Valentines Day Love is a form of common emotion It gives us the quarrel, and unneeded commotion. Love isnt rare, you dont need a potion Its created by, passion, commitment, and devotion. Love is like a pearl, it is beautiful to the eyes of the world With love in us, we tend to feel on top of the world With eyes as mesmerizing and addictive as his The one I love, the one who creates heart flutters so vigorous With his dynamic and sweet voice, the klutz he makes me puts me to shame But falling at the knees is all part of the game Tripping, or flipping, it is always the same I have all the symptoms, flushed cheeks and a spinning head untamed. But what is love without vital reactions? Love always has a twist, and silly distractions To not embarrass and confuse us, it just wouldnt be right It wouldnt show us the light. And of course, at the end of the day Spending time with our partners, the ones to whom we gave our love away There is never, ever any reason to fight When our love is burning, and shining bright On the most beautiful romantic day Oh, in what better words could I possibly say? Have a happy, marvelous, and wonderful valentines day

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A fourteen year olds sad attempt at poetry (:

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Trackkilla
3/4/2010 4:56 AM
i love to see couples on the streets in spring time :) and this poem is far better than what i've expected from you!

MaliKate
2/14/2010 8:02 PM
Oh yeah, but adults usually have a much wider vocabulary which means that they can explain things more, which also means that they are better at describing and bringing the mood to life.

anndrewart
2/14/2010 7:28 AM
I read your comments on the contest page and I wanted you to know that afe has nothing to do with it. I was able to vote for you a few times. & look how close the votes were. Still undecided, the judges have the final say.

RebeccaJea...
1/10/2010 7:01 PM
writing...I can only hope one day she will be giving enough of her mind n' words to share w/ others on this site, such as you have!!! :)

RebeccaJea...
1/10/2010 7:01 PM
Heck...I look forward to seeing MORE of your work myself!!! I'm kinda curious what else you have boiling up in that creative mind of yours tee hee~!!! Keep up the great and wonderful work!!!! I have a daughter your age who is leaning

Allen
1/10/2010 2:39 PM Premium
Thanks for uploading! I look forward to seeing some more of your work.

 



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MaliKate


Votes: 12
Views: 1,842
Date: 1/10/10
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Other: Writing